http://www.teamliquid.net/blog/A3i en-us Wed, 04 Nov 2009 12:18:54 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=105033 A3iL3r0n Hi TL.net! Spoilered below is an example of a writing critique. Originally, I wasn't going to do this, but I think it is important to show the attention that I would be giving prospective stories. This blog is a follow-up to my original entry, offering to critique pieces of writing: Original Blog: So, you want to be a writer? Edit: I have only received a two submissions so far, so ... Wed, 04 Nov 2009 11:54:06 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=105033 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=104486 A3iL3r0n A little video I edited together of my friends and I trying out Wii Tennis. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4JkpIJIQ01Y Tue, 27 Oct 2009 14:10:48 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=104486 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=103822 A3iL3r0n So, you want to be a writer. You write stories, poems, short stories- whatever, and you give them to your friends or shitty writing group, and you receive their shitty feedback. Well, I've got massive writing block right now, and can't write now. (Yeah, it's that bad. I'm resorting to shitty puns). Since I haven't contributed much to this website other than the occasional classic one-line... Sat, 17 Oct 2009 02:42:10 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=103822 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98670 A3iL3r0n I saw a picture of her kissing someone else once, and found out something I didn't know. She furrows her eyebrows when she kisses, giving the impression of absurd ferocity. She was not noticeably pretty on her own, but had the definitive moves of a pretty girl. Her face contrived to look coquettish and/or lightly concerned with such precisely played confidence she couldn't help but be everyo... Wed, 29 Jul 2009 08:38:36 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98670 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98220 A3iL3r0n There was rain and then there was no rain. There was a drying orange peel on the oak folio next to the open window. There was a man in my apartment. "What could possibly be better than the color green?" I asked. "Eggnog." He replied. I shot him in the face. He didn't respond. Thu, 23 Jul 2009 03:02:57 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98220 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98182 A3iL3r0n The bullet sank slowly into his calf. His tissue felt soft and gummy like marshmellow. He covered the red and pink little hole with his hand attentively, but lost patience with it after nothing happened and he began to knead his calf idly because it felt good. A bulge slowly became more pronounced as time passed. To him, it was hard to tell if the bulge was growing or if it was a trick of t... Wed, 22 Jul 2009 10:53:13 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=98182 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=56707 A3iL3r0n Girls who fail. Namely, girls who fail to talk about their genitals and associated uses of said genitals like 13 year-old boys. Sure, it's funny the first time, and probably the second and third too. I mean, I own a picture of a nude woman masturbating a giant and very surprised cat. But the point is, if you're spending 50% of your words in a conversation talking about your tits, vag or bein... Thu, 19 Jul 2007 21:14:08 +0900 http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=56707