Following positive feedback on the last story I blogged here, I present another.
Tumblr Link because the formatting is much more readable.
Enjoy.
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Following positive feedback on the last story I blogged here, I present another. Tumblr Link because the formatting is much more readable. Enjoy. | ||
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Australia344 Posts
Really liked your poem Men of Show Business, "Phlegyas busses tables", a wonderful image. I would like to read more. Oh, and where in Australia do you live? | ||
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Australia296 Posts
On March 20 2012 21:43 ohsea.toc wrote: Of course you're Australian. Liked the short story for the most part, though talk of stars in an opening paragraph is bound to draw a groan; even if it's just to say how they make you sick. Really liked your poem Men of Show Business, "Phlegyas busses tables", a wonderful image. I would like to read more. Oh, and where in Australia do you live? The start might need a rework. It's meant to kind of undermine those romantic, naive reactions to things like stars but maybe it doesn't get that across so well. Thanks for the feedback. Glad you like the poem. I'm from Melbourne. | ||
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