 disciple Bulgaria. October 21 2009 01:33. Posts 4549 | Profile Blog | |
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 Spanxxx United States. October 21 2009 01:43. Posts 371 | Profile |
On October 21 2009 01:36 Sadness wrote:
looks like kwanro
i agree.
looks like ya just traced over a image very roughly. your line is too thick. looks like a cartoon, unless that's what you were going for. |
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 Necosarius Sweden. October 21 2009 01:50. Posts 234 | Profile |
| Go easy on the outline of the lips. The hands looks great! |
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 Lemonwalrus United States. October 21 2009 02:04. Posts 3044 | Profile Blog |
| The lips look too feminine imo. Either way at least 10x better than anything I could have done. |
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| gumbum8 United States. October 21 2009 02:04. Posts 423 | Profile Blog |
your drawings look great to me  |
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 Hittegods Stockholm. October 21 2009 02:12. Posts 3223 | Profile |
| Work more on the noses imo, both savior and skyhigh have very distinct noses, yet they look almost identical in your drawings. |
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 El.Divino United States. October 21 2009 02:12. Posts 954 | Profile Blog |
| Cartoonishly speaking it looks awesome. |
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 omninmo October 21 2009 02:47. Posts 1618 | Profile Blog |
MJY's cheek, jaw, lips, nose, ratios need readjusting.
skyhigh's nose and lips.
great job otherwiseLast edit: 2009-10-21 02:50:02 |
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 freelander Hungary. October 21 2009 02:50. Posts 2706 | Profile Blog |
| That is go.go without glasses! |
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| disciple Bulgaria. October 21 2009 02:50. Posts 4549 | Profile Blog |
| btw I'm doing these with mouse only, once I get tablet I would be more precise |
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| caldo149 United States. October 21 2009 02:59. Posts 340 | Profile Blog |
the hair swooshes where the light hits it should go in the actual direction that their hair is going in the real picture, it makes it look different from reality otherwise.Try to make the edges go off in the same direction more or something.
Also I agree that the noses need some work, it would make your drawings look a lot more like Savior and Skyhigh respectively if you fixed them. Savior's seems too wide and Skyhigh's seems not wide enough and also a it might be a bit too low.
Lips are too distinct, adds femininity as stated before.Perhaps back off a little on the outline but make the line across the middle (where his mouth would open) more pronounced, bolder.
and the shadow on Savior's face makes it look like he got punched. |
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| zcxvbn United States. October 21 2009 03:00. Posts 80 | Profile |
On October 21 2009 02:50 freelander wrote:
That is go.go without glasses!
Was about to post this. Nice drawing nonetheless. |
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| disciple Bulgaria. October 21 2009 03:06. Posts 4549 | Profile Blog |
On October 21 2009 02:59 caldo149 wrote:
the hair swooshes where the light hits it should go in the actual direction that their hair is going in the real picture, it makes it look different from reality otherwise.Try to make the edges go off in the same direction more or something.
Also I agree that the noses need some work, it would make your drawings look a lot more like Savior and Skyhigh respectively if you fixed them. Savior's seems too wide and Skyhigh's seems not wide enough and also a it might be a bit too low.
Lips are too distinct, adds femininity as stated before.Perhaps back off a little on the outline but make the line across the middle (where his mouth would open) more pronounced, bolder.
and the shadow on Savior's face makes it look like he got punched.
thanks a lot ! |
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 HuskyTheHusky United States. October 21 2009 03:23. Posts 2178 | Profile Blog |
Just to make sure, are you doing the coloring and outlines from scratch? (I understand you're tracing the hands). So the jacket, faces, and coloring are all your work?
If so I think its really good. As others suggested I would try making the lips and nose a little less prominent. The outlines are not only black but also pretty thick for the style you're doing.
Other than that I think its really good. The next big step is drawing a picture that is in a unique pose that you made :D
Keep it up though, I like looking at your work |
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| ludic123 Norway. October 21 2009 04:29. Posts 3 | Profile |
I think your main problem is that you tend to make their jaws too small and feminine. Also, the bags under their eyes need to be more prominent. Skyhigh's eyes look pretty much the same; however, Savior's eyes are smaller and less round. These are the mistakes that stand out the most to me. Noses aren't that important, as it will not make or break the look-a-likeness of the person you're drawing. Not to say you shouldn't work on it though.
I suggest trying to look at the drawing through a camera or a mirror. It will most likely help you notice your mistakes. Try it, and see for yourself. =)Last edit: 2009-10-21 04:30:35 |
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| ShoCkeyy October 21 2009 04:43. Posts 1196 | Profile Blog |
| Was this done on illustrator? >_> |
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| disciple Bulgaria. October 21 2009 04:48. Posts 4549 | Profile Blog |
| I dont even know how illy looks like |
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| Mortality United States. October 21 2009 05:11. Posts 2601 | Profile |
The Savior one needs a lot of work. The face is off and the shading is so off it looks like someone bleached the center and right side of his body. Way too big a contrast between light and dark.
On the other hand, I really like your SkyHigh drawing. Ironically, the same shading technique used on SkyHigh works much better, probably because of how much shading there is and where on the body it's located. But I still think you should darken up some of the lines to add definition. |
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