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| Qwyn United States. September 03 2012 18:37. Posts 1478 | Profile Blog # |
Interesting concept!
Viewed the video for yoouuu. |
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| RoieTRS United States. September 03 2012 19:37. Posts 2351 | Profile Blog # |
The video's text was very slow. It should be paced around the same speed as a normal person would read. I fond myself thinking "through the............. eyes of................... the............... anomaly" it should be "through the eyes of........... the anomaly" |
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| MtlGuitarist97 United States. September 03 2012 21:20. Posts 367 | Profile # |
| Have to agree that the text was a bit slow, but other than that it was well done. |
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| ChiknAdobo United States. September 03 2012 23:33. Posts 183 | Profile # |
| Not that bad but it seemed kinda cheesy. I also thought it weird that you combined the social justice issues of sex trafficking and bullying. Perhaps you should consider poverty and substance abuse/drug trafficking. |
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| Centum September 04 2012 04:33. Posts 7 | Profile Blog # |
Thanks for all the feedback and for viewing the video 
I'll be passing that feedback along.
-Centum |
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| CecilSunkure United States. September 04 2012 04:37. Posts 2272 | Profile Blog # |
| The text shows up waaay too slow and led to boredom. Also, the text is just plain hard to read because it's bright yellow and all squished. |
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