This is a Youtube commercial for an interactive comic that I'm Illustrating. It will be available on Mac OS, Droid, Windows and in Paperback(not so interactive). We are a small business so marketing is difficult, which is why this video was made and posted on Youtube.
I'm hoping that you guys can help us out and give us some more views on the Youtube page, so please check it out.
Qwyn United States. September 03 2012 18:37. Posts 1478
The video's text was very slow. It should be paced around the same speed as a normal person would read. I fond myself thinking "through the............. eyes of................... the............... anomaly" it should be "through the eyes of........... the anomaly"
konadora, in Racenilatr's blog: "you need to stop thinking about starcraft or anything computer-related for that matter. It's becoming a bad addiction imo"
MtlGuitarist97 United States. September 03 2012 21:20. Posts 367
Not that bad but it seemed kinda cheesy. I also thought it weird that you combined the social justice issues of sex trafficking and bullying. Perhaps you should consider poverty and substance abuse/drug trafficking.