 SpiralArchitect United States. November 12 2008 08:25. Posts 2116 | Profile Blog |
Wraiths with Cheese
My speedlings lead the attack to his base.
But SCVs and marines turn them to blood
I look to his ramp to see an empty space
My 9 pool ling rush ended up a dud.
The time has come to change my strategy.
A drone quietly floats to minerals outside
He stops and settles in to make a hatchery.
Terran sees the growing pouch, wonders whats inside.
As I wait for my spire to arrive on scene
A terrible sound pierced the air.
I do not have the men for this mess to be clean
For I hit space and saw a wraith or two there.
Pew pew goes the wraith on my overlord pew pew
Another one shows up "Leave me be, please!"
Instead of gg this time I type QQ
For I lost to Wraiths combined with cheese.
The end.
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| | TeamLiquids #1 illiterate writer, writin dem wordz is de hardz. |
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 Nytefish United Kingdom. November 12 2008 08:28. Posts 1847 | Profile Blog |
| wraiths do more of a woomf woomf on overlords though |
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| SpiralArchitect United States. November 12 2008 08:30. Posts 2116 | Profile Blog |
| pew pew rhymed so it went through |
| | TeamLiquids #1 illiterate writer, writin dem wordz is de hardz. |
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 DamageControL United States. November 12 2008 08:31. Posts 2095 | Profile Blog | |
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 Ozarugold November 12 2008 08:34. Posts 1830 | Profile Blog | |
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 SiegeTanksandBlueGoo China. November 12 2008 08:35. Posts 678 | Profile Blog |
It's good but you need to get a rhythm to it. Try anapestic rhyme for this. ^)_^
JK, seriously though, not bad. |
| | What does the scouter say about his macro level? It's Over 9000 minerals! |
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 SpiritoftheTunA United States. November 12 2008 12:13. Posts 4736 | Profile Blog | |
| | I REALLY LOVE COCK OH YES I DO YES SIR COCK COCK COCK COCK COCK ALL ABOUT THE COCK |
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| inlagdsil Canada. November 12 2008 12:18. Posts 826 | Profile |
| Haha SC poems are awesome. Make more! |
| | There is nothing cuter than a zergling when it has just started taking crack |
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