On August 22 2014 12:43 Ty2 wrote: Simpleminded simians speaking words unoriginal you simple minded aboriginals Saying whack saying expletives erroneously erratically oh not so dramatically Copying mindlessly a chaotic morasses immensity losing track of the originals Masses entranced at a glance careen eyes slow as molasses gracefulness devoid destroying lyricists such a tragedy
The only dramatic tragedy I see... Is this poor excuse for an MC Saying, saying, simpleminded, simpleminded, original, unoriginal Rhythmless nerd, rhymes like that should be unforgivable Insert some random words here with a few extra syllables I should charge you for these lessons But I'll give you this one free, the rest, they'll be billable.
**nods**
Don't worry, I'll devastate you soon WarSame I just couldn't stand to look at this lame claimin he's destroying lyricists, come on now really? Someone had to lay that trick out.....Sealy
On August 22 2014 13:41 WarSame wrote: NoMan, on the first one, you can switch to "Force them to rhyme" or something to help even out your syllable counts. Your second one just has a bit of a rhyming problem all around, but it is freestyle.
Ty, you complain about unoriginal words but you repeat yours a couple of times each, obviously. You can repeat words, but it has to work in the rapping. You can't just rhyme quarterback with quarterback.
On August 22 2014 13:41 WarSame wrote: NoMan, on the first one, you can switch to "Force them to rhyme" or something to help even out your syllable counts. Your second one just has a bit of a rhyming problem all around, but it is freestyle.
Ty, you complain about unoriginal words but you repeat yours a couple of times each, obviously. You can repeat words, but it has to work in the rapping. You can't just rhyme quarterback with quarterback.
yea like i said, im pretty bad at 'freestyle' xD
Syllable counts don't mean shit when you're doing a freestyle, that's why it's a freestyle. You could say something like:
Hi. I'll bounce you off the ground like a basketball on a trampoline with rocket fuel into the sky.
Additionally, you can stay on beat if you change tempo, so even if you've written something that's not an equal number of syllables, it can still work and sound good. Most hip-hop beats don't have an even number of counts in each drum sequence, and will look something like this:
1 2 3 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 5
Here's a verse from Eminem's Rap God:
So you'll be Thor and I'll be Odin [8 syllables] You rodent, I'm omnipotent [8] Let off then I'm reloading [7] Immediately with these bombs I'm totin' [10] And I should not be woken [7] I'm the walking dead [5] But I'm just a talking head, a zombie floating [12] But I got your mom deep throating [8]
So there are a total of 8 lines 65 syllables
The way Eminem makes this work out is to pronounce "immediately" as "'mediately", so it has an even number of syllables at the end of the sequence. So while it looks "pretty" to make your number of syllables in each bar look even on paper, it doesn't always work out very well when you sound it out, and this has a lot to do with which syllables and/or words you tend to emphasize, versus those you either slur or pronounce 'less'. This is why you'll hear and see the 'g' at the end of verbs removed, i.e.: "Rappin'" instead of "Rapping".
If you do a completely unwritten freestyle, you will almost certainly not be on beat, which is why you'll hear people start off a freestyle verse slow, saying each word with a lot of emphasis, and then at some point, talking really fast to stay on beat. And it's not like they're scrambling to stay on beat or being sloppy, but they just hear the music and are used to being in synch with that pendulum.
On August 22 2014 13:41 WarSame wrote: NoMan, on the first one, you can switch to "Force them to rhyme" or something to help even out your syllable counts. Your second one just has a bit of a rhyming problem all around, but it is freestyle.
Ty, you complain about unoriginal words but you repeat yours a couple of times each, obviously. You can repeat words, but it has to work in the rapping. You can't just rhyme quarterback with quarterback.
Syllable counts don't mean shit when you're doing a freestyle, that's why it's a freestyle. You could say something like:
Hi. I'll bounce you off the ground like a basketball on a trampoline with rocket fuel into the sky.
Additionally, you can stay on beat if you change tempo, so even if you've written something that's not an equal number of syllables, it can still work and sound good. Most hip-hop beats don't have an even number of counts in each drum sequence, and will look something like this:
1 2 3 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 5
Here's a verse from Eminem's Rap God:
So you'll be Thor and I'll be Odin [8 syllables] You rodent, I'm omnipotent [8] Let off then I'm reloading [7] Immediately with these bombs I'm totin' [10] And I should not be woken [7] I'm the walking dead [5] But I'm just a talking head, a zombie floating [12] But I got your mom deep throating [8]
So there are a total of 8 lines 65 syllables
The way Eminem makes this work out is to pronounce "immediately" as "'mediately", so it has an even number of syllables at the end of the sequence. So while it looks "pretty" to make your number of syllables in each bar look even on paper, it doesn't always work out very well when you sound it out, and this has a lot to do with which syllables and/or words you tend to emphasize, versus those you either slur or pronounce 'less'. This is why you'll hear and see the 'g' at the end of verbs removed, i.e.: "Rappin'" instead of "Rapping".
If you do a completely unwritten freestyle, you will almost certainly not be on beat, which is why you'll hear people start off a freestyle verse slow, saying each word with a lot of emphasis, and then at some point, talking really fast to stay on beat. And it's not like they're scrambling to stay on beat or being sloppy, but they just hear the music and are used to being in synch with that pendulum.
Yeah making fit anything on paper isn't really the point of Rap in any form (no offense to anyone). But the reality is when you start actually spitting something you wrote down you realize (hopefully) it could sound better by moving some stuff around or changing some emphasis or changing the tempo/rhythm.
Continuing with Rap God -Eminem.
Lyrics coming at you at supersonic speed, (JJ Fad) Uh, summa lumma dooma lumma you assuming I'm a human What I gotta do to get it through to you I'm superhuman Innovative and I'm made of rubber, so that anything you say is Ricochet in off a me and it'll glue to you And I'm devastating more than ever demonstrating How to give a motherfuckin' audience a feeling like it's levitating Never fading, and I know that haters are forever waiting For the day that they can say I fell off, they'll be celebrating 'Cause I know the way to get 'em motivated I make elevating music You make elevator music
Not especially impressive on paper, then you hear him spit it....
For a 'Mainstream' artist Eminem is unbelievable.
I bet anyone here could try to just imitate what he did there for hours/days/weeks/months and still not come close to sounding as clear at the pace he was spittin. (no offense again) That's what I'm sayin we are missing with the written's and why I might chew on some of nina's verses if she doesn't get some audio up soon ;P
On August 22 2014 13:41 WarSame wrote: NoMan, on the first one, you can switch to "Force them to rhyme" or something to help even out your syllable counts. Your second one just has a bit of a rhyming problem all around, but it is freestyle.
Ty, you complain about unoriginal words but you repeat yours a couple of times each, obviously. You can repeat words, but it has to work in the rapping. You can't just rhyme quarterback with quarterback.
Syllable counts don't mean shit when you're doing a freestyle, that's why it's a freestyle. You could say something like:
Hi. I'll bounce you off the ground like a basketball on a trampoline with rocket fuel into the sky.
Additionally, you can stay on beat if you change tempo, so even if you've written something that's not an equal number of syllables, it can still work and sound good. Most hip-hop beats don't have an even number of counts in each drum sequence, and will look something like this:
1 2 3 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 5
Here's a verse from Eminem's Rap God:
So you'll be Thor and I'll be Odin [8 syllables] You rodent, I'm omnipotent [8] Let off then I'm reloading [7] Immediately with these bombs I'm totin' [10] And I should not be woken [7] I'm the walking dead [5] But I'm just a talking head, a zombie floating [12] But I got your mom deep throating [8]
So there are a total of 8 lines 65 syllables
The way Eminem makes this work out is to pronounce "immediately" as "'mediately", so it has an even number of syllables at the end of the sequence. So while it looks "pretty" to make your number of syllables in each bar look even on paper, it doesn't always work out very well when you sound it out, and this has a lot to do with which syllables and/or words you tend to emphasize, versus those you either slur or pronounce 'less'. This is why you'll hear and see the 'g' at the end of verbs removed, i.e.: "Rappin'" instead of "Rapping".
If you do a completely unwritten freestyle, you will almost certainly not be on beat, which is why you'll hear people start off a freestyle verse slow, saying each word with a lot of emphasis, and then at some point, talking really fast to stay on beat. And it's not like they're scrambling to stay on beat or being sloppy, but they just hear the music and are used to being in synch with that pendulum.
Yeah making fit anything on paper isn't really the point of Rap in any form (no offense to anyone). But the reality is when you start actually spitting something you wrote down you realize (hopefully) it could sound better by moving some stuff around or changing some emphasis or changing the tempo/rhythm.
Lyrics coming at you at supersonic speed, (JJ Fad) Uh, summa lumma dooma lumma you assuming I'm a human What I gotta do to get it through to you I'm superhuman Innovative and I'm made of rubber, so that anything you say is Ricochet in off a me and it'll glue to you And I'm devastating more than ever demonstrating How to give a motherfuckin' audience a feeling like it's levitating Never fading, and I know that haters are forever waiting For the day that they can say I fell off, they'll be celebrating 'Cause I know the way to get 'em motivated I make elevating music You make elevator music
Not especially impressive on paper, then you hear him spit it....
I bet anyone here could try to just imitate what he did there for hours/days/weeks/months and still not come close to sounding as clear at the pace he was spittin. (no offense again) That's what I'm sayin we are missing with the written's and why I might chew on some of nina's verses if she doesn't get some audio up soon ;P
Eminem is a bit overrated when it comes to 'speed'. People like Outsider and even Busta Rhymes are far better, and then for lyrics and message I don't think anyone beats K-Rino.
On August 22 2014 13:41 WarSame wrote: NoMan, on the first one, you can switch to "Force them to rhyme" or something to help even out your syllable counts. Your second one just has a bit of a rhyming problem all around, but it is freestyle.
Ty, you complain about unoriginal words but you repeat yours a couple of times each, obviously. You can repeat words, but it has to work in the rapping. You can't just rhyme quarterback with quarterback.
Syllable counts don't mean shit when you're doing a freestyle, that's why it's a freestyle. You could say something like:
Hi. I'll bounce you off the ground like a basketball on a trampoline with rocket fuel into the sky.
Additionally, you can stay on beat if you change tempo, so even if you've written something that's not an equal number of syllables, it can still work and sound good. Most hip-hop beats don't have an even number of counts in each drum sequence, and will look something like this:
1 2 3 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 5
Here's a verse from Eminem's Rap God:
So you'll be Thor and I'll be Odin [8 syllables] You rodent, I'm omnipotent [8] Let off then I'm reloading [7] Immediately with these bombs I'm totin' [10] And I should not be woken [7] I'm the walking dead [5] But I'm just a talking head, a zombie floating [12] But I got your mom deep throating [8]
So there are a total of 8 lines 65 syllables
The way Eminem makes this work out is to pronounce "immediately" as "'mediately", so it has an even number of syllables at the end of the sequence. So while it looks "pretty" to make your number of syllables in each bar look even on paper, it doesn't always work out very well when you sound it out, and this has a lot to do with which syllables and/or words you tend to emphasize, versus those you either slur or pronounce 'less'. This is why you'll hear and see the 'g' at the end of verbs removed, i.e.: "Rappin'" instead of "Rapping".
If you do a completely unwritten freestyle, you will almost certainly not be on beat, which is why you'll hear people start off a freestyle verse slow, saying each word with a lot of emphasis, and then at some point, talking really fast to stay on beat. And it's not like they're scrambling to stay on beat or being sloppy, but they just hear the music and are used to being in synch with that pendulum.
Yeah making fit anything on paper isn't really the point of Rap in any form (no offense to anyone). But the reality is when you start actually spitting something you wrote down you realize (hopefully) it could sound better by moving some stuff around or changing some emphasis or changing the tempo/rhythm.
Continuing with Rap God -Eminem.
Lyrics coming at you at supersonic speed, (JJ Fad) Uh, summa lumma dooma lumma you assuming I'm a human What I gotta do to get it through to you I'm superhuman Innovative and I'm made of rubber, so that anything you say is Ricochet in off a me and it'll glue to you And I'm devastating more than ever demonstrating How to give a motherfuckin' audience a feeling like it's levitating Never fading, and I know that haters are forever waiting For the day that they can say I fell off, they'll be celebrating 'Cause I know the way to get 'em motivated I make elevating music You make elevator music
Not especially impressive on paper, then you hear him spit it....
I bet anyone here could try to just imitate what he did there for hours/days/weeks/months and still not come close to sounding as clear at the pace he was spittin. (no offense again) That's what I'm sayin we are missing with the written's and why I might chew on some of nina's verses if she doesn't get some audio up soon ;P
Eminem is a bit overrated when it comes to 'speed'. People like Outsider and even Busta Rhymes are far better, and then for lyrics and message I don't think anyone beats K-Rino.
On August 23 2014 03:52 GreenHorizons wrote: There's a different thread for general rap discussion.
I hate that thread with a vengeance. I just go there and see like "Did you hear the new [insert crappy artist here] album? It's so good!" and then some replies "Yeah, that shit is dope." and I'm just like okay bye.
On August 23 2014 03:52 GreenHorizons wrote: There's a different thread for general rap discussion.
I hate that thread with a vengeance. I just go there and see like "Did you hear the new [insert crappy artist here] album? It's so good!" and then some replies "Yeah, that shit is dope." and I'm just like okay bye.
That thread is terrible, but the problem is that if we replace it with this thread then we've lost the freestyling thread.
Green, it's hard to battle against you. There's not really a whole lot to go against from you. Your rhyming is decent to good, your subjects aren't really condemnable, and it's a stretch to try to insult anything you throw out. I'm having that trouble a lot, which is why I spent a while on the topic of your penis, and nina being a lesbian.
Can you put the lyrics here too? From your last posts it's hard to keep track of your lyrics sometimes.
EDIT: Nina, your flow sounded great, but your enunciation was pretty poor, as you know. You may have been chirping me but I couldn't really tell. The only part I heard well was "I've got AIDS."
On August 22 2014 12:43 Ty2 wrote: Simpleminded simians speaking words unoriginal you simple minded aboriginals Saying whack saying expletives erroneously erratically oh not so dramatically Copying mindlessly a chaotic morasses immensity losing track of the originals Masses entranced at a glance careen eyes slow as molasses gracefulness devoid destroying lyricists such a tragedy
The only dramatic tragedy I see... Is this poor excuse for an MC Saying, saying, simpleminded, simpleminded, original, unoriginal Rhythmless nerd, rhymes like that should be unforgivable Insert some random words here with a few extra syllables I should charge you for these lessons But I'll give you this one free, the rest, they'll be billable.
**nods**
Don't worry, I'll devastate you soon WarSame I just couldn't stand to look at this lame claimin he's destroying lyricists, come on now really? Someone had to lay that trick out.....Sealy
The only dramatic tragedy I see... Is this poor excuse for an MC
This statement is the epitome of hypocrisy Does your name happen to be Hippokrates? The holy trinity bestows upon me the powers of Jesus under the manger I'm a mad messiah The nonsense you spew is even more whack than the lyrics of Socrates, you're a starving pariah Words shat out by your mouth aren't caked with supremacy, no, worse, they're caked with mediocrity I chew your words like gum and spit them out like gruel Words of a saint, man, I'm not trying to be cruel Charging for lessons when you barely can stay cool? Talking to you is like being a priest taking a kid to school You stuttering, gotta suffocate, enunciate every 5 seconds, you gotta take a 2 hour break A rap battle is more than your illiterate ill perceiving mind can take
I did it.
Your head is baller ballistic Struggling to rhyme with two syllables that's what I call a lyricist who's sadistic The audience needs more, a finale ending to a beating you all better get ready and remember your seating This rap is about to have some closure, a forfeiture of grace for the finer feature Refined finesse, god bless, this is going to be the end prepare yourself for the ultimate beating War cries foretold, moments like these go untold, unsung in the lightest of the brightest of new ages Endless cycle of being the best, time to put an end to this, you better find a lyricist in the yellow pages My soul is more impassioned with dirt than your shoe sole Take cover, hold fire, there's gonna be a devastation so sudden so killer relentless a swarm's gonna overwhelm overrunning all of your senses This is gonna be so intense it's gonna pull out your menses Fire away my armor is titanium yours is as thick as your cranium Resistance be futile, one day I storm your cubicle, the next day I dissect your cuticle This is an epic aria, a war song sung at the highest of the mighty rung The mighty brass are too good to hear out your rhymes that compared to mine look like dung
Praying to the gods forgive me for the unforgivable, unspeakable acts soon to unfold, what I'm gonna do to this fool is so god damning bold Heart towered over clouds a crimson powered lyricist linguistically dismantling a distinguished dissident as your phallus prunes up cold Raging on, battle cries yelled, hold you fire, don't retreat I repeat time to bring on the heat Soon enough there's a victory song on the bells that is rung as you limp away in piss stained pants gonna need to be wrung. Damn, what's that cat got your tongue? God like compositions leave you in the fetal position indignation is the definition of your philosophic procrastination you better beat it soon, first your heart cracks next it's gonna be your intractable exasperation Among us is a mortal mostly morose is his malignant mind marred by the massive mythic god Mars He came through man's portal and there he was defeated finally by a man untamed even by a demon's proposition. That man was Ty2, Ty2 so true, a god enlivened Nosferatu, an amalgamation artistically bombastically drastically altering the space time dimension known to all mortals masking the presence of an effervescent mortal being such as GreenHorizons Another man flawed, so ancient he should go back to the Amazons
I'm the man. I did it.
Drops the mic
All comments are made in jest and are not meant to be personal.
Edit: Yo. I know I stutter and it isn't perfect and yah I try to talk really fast at the cool parts but I fail and when I try to put emphasis on my P's at the beginning of the video it sounds like I'm spitting really hard, but yah. Don't give me none of that. Talk when you upload your own audio file. So yeh enjoy.
Oh yeah man, yeah I'll kill you soon... give me five hundred years By the time people hear this we'll have evolved past ears I'm one in a million, step to me and I'll show you Darwinian I'll give you plenty of time if you promise to never rap again
They call me Ty2, I typoed, it should have been Try2Hard If you ask me, I'm the number one bard, leaving you charred The diss is coming up, here's the diss, BLEAH, aww, you missed it You woulda pissed your britches if you had listened to my vicious shit-fit
I think I'm a God, but can't see past my nose when I drop my glasses In the rap tree all I can see is asses, got no girl to give stage passes In the pantheon I'm the little lion, the pussy that gets sent off to Zion Come at me and I'll run cryin', most of my damage is through brine
We love the world unity is forever Dude don't diss just to feel clever Living life at large upholding family values Life is like a bunch of eight ball cues
You gather the love like a carefree dove Don't lose the eight balls, the elements of love Let's stop the hate and be like two Romeo's I'm a bard, I'm a serenader, a man of the Victorian let's be brohemeos. (combination of romeo and bro)
You a Montague I'm a Capulet, together we make an awesome jammer My lyrics and your love together we unite like a hover hammer Feuding families, forever faint, let's put a stop to this and make it joyful Peace is my middle name I don't mean to be hurtful
Ahaha Ty2 I can't be mad at you. I was just poking fun at your "Here comes the diss, this is the diss, there was the diss" delivery that you originally had.