Special thanks to: SidianTheBard - for awesome layout feedback & suggestions Monitor - for being the light of my life
Published Name: "Luci - Birth of Tragedy" Published On: NA Map Size: 152x136
Description: The swamp has consumed what was once an expansive Protoss temple. Platforms float above its hazardous water, providing each player with one safe & dry place. Logical macro in the base, and hectic chaos below. Find your balance.
Interesting map--we haven't seen many maps with such high base density. Layout's pretty solid. The natural ramp doesn't look like it can be reasonably walled by Protoss though, and if it sees play "The Birth of Tragedy" is sure to be a huge mouthful for casters.
Looks good bud! Only thing I'd change is making the rock wall in the middle moved a bit. I dislike how part of it is sticking out right into the ramp, should just move it back away from the ramp a bit. =)
As you know, I love the aesthetics. I already told you that haha. Keep it up! =)
The bridge is the same width as the Nat choke on Acid Plant. It should be fine if you're just concerned about width, Ziggurat.
I'm not super worried about the name. It's only one syllable longer than "Darkness Sanctuary", and it's pretty easy to shorten or abbreviate it if it's too much. Maybe I'll cut "The" from the name. That might make it sound a bit better in sentence.
I moved the rocks closer, Sidian. I shifted them because of clipping & so it's easier for the other base to keep an eye on them. It does look a bit confusing in this iteration.