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Being a graduate of the 2007 year;; grad write ups are due within a week or so. What are some things that you guys generally write? Heres an example of mine so far -350 characters max(ive basically taken ideas from stuff i see others write and what i see and believe)
In today’s society, money rules: he with the biggest toys wins. Ours is a culture where superficial appearance is valued over internal beauty. Nothing adheres to this concept more than that of instant gratification. Lost however is the true key to success: excelling in all aspects of life, ignoring the quick fix. It’s not who you are on the outside, but what you do that defines you.
IMO i think is a bit too random for a grad write up. what are your opinions? Since most of them are usually just one line of quote or "shut-out to my homies and thanks x y z for ;;;" anyways yeah.
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Russian Federation1401 Posts
People exist on this planet for the sole purpose of entertaining me.
by Scott Adams
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Netherlands19123 Posts
"Live for the Swarm!!!"
By Infested Terran.
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Hong Kong20321 Posts
On November 26 2006 17:44 Nyovne wrote: "Live for the Swarm!!!"
By Infested Terran.
oh i thuoght it was die. hmm.. guess i havne't touched infested terrans in too long =. =
live for the swarm...to die ;\
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say something like "I graduated, GG NO RE!" My friend said "GG" on his and I wrote a poem >_>
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On November 26 2006 17:17 LegendaryDreams wrote: Being a graduate of the 2007 year;; grad write ups are due within a week or so. What are some things that you guys generally write? Heres an example of mine so far -350 characters max(ive basically taken ideas from stuff i see others write and what i see and believe)
In today’s society, money rules: he with the biggest toys wins. Ours is a culture where superficial appearance is valued over internal beauty. Nothing adheres to this concept more than that of instant gratification. Lost however is the true key to success: excelling in all aspects of life, ignoring the quick fix. It’s not who you are on the outside, but what you do that defines you.
IMO i think is a bit too random for a grad write up. what are your opinions? Since most of them are usually just one line of quote or "shut-out to my homies and thanks x y z for ;;;" anyways yeah.
The people to whom your trying to bring your point across will not even read the quote. For me, whenever I think of writing something that'll be permanent I try to think of how it'll be remember. I think your write-up sounds bitter. VERY TRUE! But bitter. Put a positive spin on it somehow. Say that the people that your friends with are not money hungry whores, instead of saying everyone else is a money hungry whore.
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Russian Federation1401 Posts
On November 26 2006 17:47 alffla wrote:Show nested quote +On November 26 2006 17:44 Nyovne wrote: "Live for the Swarm!!!"
By Infested Terran. oh i thuoght it was die. hmm.. guess i havne't touched infested terrans in too long =. = live for the swarm...to die ;\
Ive never even seen a game with infested terrans on it. How much do they even cost?
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Your all a figment of my imagination, a speck of information in this forever expanding universe. I am God, but I decided to transform into a human form to finally understand what is so wrong in this oh so perfect world of mine that all you have been complaining about. I will use this human body of mine to change the world, become great, and hopefully, you can all forgive me for your miserable existence.
Pretty stupid, but I wrote this out of spite to my peers. Plus I was slightly in a state of irrationality.
Just talk with your heart, I'd say. Who cares what other people think? JUST DO IT.
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On November 26 2006 17:51 SF-Fork wrote:Show nested quote +On November 26 2006 17:47 alffla wrote:On November 26 2006 17:44 Nyovne wrote: "Live for the Swarm!!!"
By Infested Terran. oh i thuoght it was die. hmm.. guess i havne't touched infested terrans in too long =. = live for the swarm...to die ;\ Ive never even seen a game with infested terrans on it. How much do they even cost?
100/50 iirc
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^Correct. And LIVE FOR THE SWARM!! is correct. You need two !! though.
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How should i change mine so i get my message across but more happy?
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On November 26 2006 18:04 LegendaryDreams wrote: How should i change mine so i get my message across but more happy? In today’s society, fluffy bunnies rule: he with the fluffiest wins. Ours is a culture where fluffy appearance is valued over non-fluffy beauty. Nothing adheres to this concept more than that of instant fluffification. Lost however is the true key to fluffiness: excelling in all aspects of fluff, ignoring the quick bunnies. It’s not who you are on the outside, but what you fluff that defines you.
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something funny, yet true. My grad write up was written 30 minutes before the deadline in the yearbook room and most people found it pretty funny. It went almost like this.
This write-up is like most things I've done in high school: procrastinated. So, in a hurried good-bye, later jerks.
P.S. I don't think you're all jerks. P.P.S. Well, some of you. P.P.P.S Especially you, Phil.
I managed to sum up my high school career and include my best friend in a humorous way. Sucess!
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I think teenagers come off as ignorant smart-asses when they try and talk about the meaning of life and the keys to "true" success and all that other garbage. If you're determined to sound deep you should limit your scope to North American popular culture or media hype and commercialism... but please-- if only to spare yourself a bitter wince when you read your yearbook when you're 40-- try and talk about something you have experience with, like: the potential benefits of day-dreaming about that really dreamy 16 yr old you pass in the hallways during lunch hour; or how asserting male dominance by shooting spitwads at skinny, unpopular kids is psychologically analogous to prison inmates ejaculating upon their "bitches."
Or do what you're planning... its not like yearbook messages matter much.
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Stop trying to preach. Just write something corny like "Wow what a ride! I'm glad it's over! Thank you __________." like everybody else.
Looking back on your announcement in 30 years will make you shake your head and think "what was I trying to accomplish here?"
Just blend in.
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"So long, and thanks for all the fish!"
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thedeadhaji
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I'm class of 2007... from college, so i dont think i have these? :O
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