A little bit about myself, I'm a b-/bish level protoss player. I commentate on the games while I'm playing them, that way I feel like I can provide better insight to why I am doing things while I'm doing them. Please give me any constructive criticism that you can, the thing that I most noticed was that my sc volume was too loud, so I will be fixing that for later VODS. Hopefull you guys will enjoy it, thanks a lot.
Attempt as an FPVOD w/ commentary
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Aux1
United States780 Posts
A little bit about myself, I'm a b-/bish level protoss player. I commentate on the games while I'm playing them, that way I feel like I can provide better insight to why I am doing things while I'm doing them. Please give me any constructive criticism that you can, the thing that I most noticed was that my sc volume was too loud, so I will be fixing that for later VODS. Hopefull you guys will enjoy it, thanks a lot. | ||
NotSupporting
Sweden1998 Posts
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Aux1
United States780 Posts
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Centric
United States1989 Posts
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AkOqFIxXJyc | ||
HypnoticPoo
Singapore291 Posts
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Aux1
United States780 Posts
On June 07 2008 17:57 HypnoticPoo wrote: Nice work. But we need more terran fpvod commentaries ): everybody knows that protoss is the best race to play | ||
NotSupporting
Sweden1998 Posts
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littlechava
United States7215 Posts
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Aux1
United States780 Posts
On June 07 2008 18:31 littlechava wrote: get some pvz/pvts going! hmm pvz is my best so maybe i will do one next, i dont really find many good vs z games on iccup though, they all try 9pool speed | ||
Southlight
United States11743 Posts
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Aux1
United States780 Posts
On June 07 2008 18:59 Southlight wrote: I was under the assumption that 9 pool speed was a relatively standard ZvP opening? >_> uhh when it does no damage its hard to lose as toss... | ||
morfyy
Romania593 Posts
edit: nice play | ||
HeavOnEarth
United States7087 Posts
Nice job with the vids, and LOL@ them taking 4+~ hours to upload to youtube I think you need to commentate on some pro replays, so you can see both sides Next Artosis in the making! It was said here first! | ||
Spenguin
Australia3316 Posts
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Dromar
United States2145 Posts
Suggestions: 1. Wake up. You sounded like you were tired or stoned IMO. Try to get a bit more emotion in your voice, though it may be hard to do while you're playing I guess. 2. Uh, pretty good otherwise I guess. Question: 1. At 8:15 into the video, you had just fended off his first reaver harass, and had ~12 goons outside his base. Wouldn't that have been a good time to move in? His reaver obviously wasn't there to defend. | ||
NotSupporting
Sweden1998 Posts
On June 07 2008 20:57 Dromar wrote: 1. Wake up. You sounded like you were tired or stoned IMO. Try to get a bit more emotion in your voice, though it may be hard to do while you're playing I guess. Yea, I can agree with this one. | ||
SwaY.
Dominican Republic98 Posts
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Emptyness
Bulgaria1016 Posts
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edahl
Norway483 Posts
(edit: or record the voice just a bit louder) | ||
MiniRoman
Canada3953 Posts
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gwho
United States632 Posts
i'm talking about korean leagues and not battlenet attack. O.o | ||
Holylight
Korea (South)460 Posts
What I'm saying is that you don't stand out at all. You're not bad but just anonymous. Commentating while playing is a concept I never understood | ||
Holylight
Korea (South)460 Posts
On June 08 2008 02:36 gwho wrote: where do pepole get fpvod's from???? i'm talking about korean leagues and not battlenet attack. O.o Well there was a korean show with a guy and a girl standing in front of some background animations... forgot the name (maybe it was several shows) which aired FP Vods some year back. Probably some show is doing the same thing now I guess since you can find them on youtube | ||
Aux1
United States780 Posts
On June 08 2008 02:51 Holylight wrote: Good effort. Just a hint though, you don't have to sound all tired and drugged if your commentating, spice it up a bit. Commentating while playing is a concept I never understood the point with well it just creates less work for me, and i think then its easier to explain to someone how i am doing something and why(at least i think it is). Also, I wasnt tired or anything, it is just hard to get excited about a game that I know that I would probably win going in, maybe when I play vs some better opponents it will be easier to be me excited and the games will be more intense. | ||
Holylight
Korea (South)460 Posts
On June 08 2008 02:57 Aux1 wrote: well it just creates less work for me, and i think then its easier to explain to someone how i am doing something and why(at least i think it is). Also, I wasnt tired or anything, it is just hard to get excited about a game that I know that I would probably win going in, maybe when I play vs some better opponents it will be easier to be me excited and the games will be more intense. Yeah I know. I mean its not bad at all just not that interesting imo. Probably but maybe you should try to record a FPVod and put on audio after? I think your voice is good | ||
Aux1
United States780 Posts
On June 07 2008 20:57 Dromar wrote: I thought it was relatively good FPvod. Suggestions: 1. Wake up. You sounded like you were tired or stoned IMO. Try to get a bit more emotion in your voice, though it may be hard to do while you're playing I guess. 2. Uh, pretty good otherwise I guess. Question: 1. At 8:15 into the video, you had just fended off his first reaver harass, and had ~12 goons outside his base. Wouldn't that have been a good time to move in? His reaver obviously wasn't there to defend. after I fended his first reaver harass (I assume you mean the shuttle he brought t my base) it probably would have been disastrous to try to move up his ramp because at that point he was probably at least on two gate, and I assume would have had at least ten goons. Also, the only way for me to lose th egame then was to suicide my goons, so it was safer to just continue to try to contain. | ||
ydg
United States690 Posts
*goes off to test it* nice fpvod btw, do more | ||
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