Perhaps with better scouting/building placement he could have lost less mining time from Larva's initial attack. Nada should have done a better job at hiding his ghost. He upgraded ocular implants, but he actually set off the nuke 2 seconds before it even finished. He had irradiate, but he chose to save energy for defensive matrix on the ghost. Maybe irradiating mutas + going for cloak instead would have been a better decision. He should have put his vessels over the ghost so the mutas couldn't target it.
After a certain point I stopped writing SCVs and marines, just because it was too tedious and would make the BO too long. Basically don't stop making them.
If you can think of any other iconic, unique, or useful build order examples please let me know and I will try to write them out.