New SC2 newspaper: The Weekly All In - Page 2
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ejozl
Denmark3143 Posts
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Boucot
France15997 Posts
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GGuMake
United States74 Posts
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TelecoM
United States10583 Posts
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Negius
Netherlands290 Posts
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Twine
France246 Posts
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Jett.Jack.Alvir
Canada2250 Posts
I really like the article by Chad Abshire about DeMuslim's departure from EG. Chad added a lot of detail; it is very informative and in-depth. I want to help. I am not a very good writer, but I can edit work to increase brevity and readability. At the moment, Chad's article is difficult to read. Its long, and he keeps referring to DeMuslim as Baker, perhaps about a dozen times. Reading the same word over and over can be difficult to read. The only time DeMuslim is referred differently is twice. The first as the 'Devil Terran', and second by a fuller moniker "Benjamin 'DeMuslim' Baker". I can find at least 6 times we can cut out his name, or refer to him differently. As well, shortening articles can give you more screen real estate for your fucking amazing artwork or advertising space. I really liked the poster propaganda, and loved the WCS poster. I don't have skype, as well what is 'DM'? Please let me know an alternate way to contact you. I can edit about 2-3 articles a week, but it might have to stop if other work picks up for me. edit: for brevity and readability | ||
Jett.Jack.Alvir
Canada2250 Posts
I scrolled down to read the save esports part. Fuckin hilarious, I loved the laurels at the bottom. edit: just finished reading the Life/Maru game 7 play by play description. Great read! second edit: Holy shit that is a fuck tonne of content to read. Jackson Hughes articles are funny. Haven't read all the articles, but will get to it when I can. | ||
Trumpetmcool
United States26 Posts
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GreenFate
France289 Posts
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rotta
5560 Posts
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noobPride
Spain333 Posts
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dUTtrOACh
Canada2339 Posts
Great work! A question if I may: Do people still read magazines? | ||
RaiKageRyu
Canada4772 Posts
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TRaFFiC
Canada1448 Posts
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NexT_SC2
United States117 Posts
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Liman
Serbia681 Posts
Add more Koreans and have someone translate newspaper to Korean,they would like this for sure. | ||
Pontius Pirate
United States1557 Posts
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Tesarul
Belgium79 Posts
On February 16 2015 07:55 Pontius Pirate wrote: Whoa, this is really good. I ignored it at first, because the example, for some reason, got me expecting it to be in latin, and I figured this was like some artistic statement or something. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lorem_ipsum | ||
Tokensy
Poland16 Posts
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