On December 13 2012 05:07 mca64[KDV] wrote:
southpark will be playin terran and his terran is real c/c+
southpark will be playin terran and his terran is real c/c+
That's like me signing up for the D KOTH. I'm ~C+ stop trolling, or start to think
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quirinus
Croatia2489 Posts
On December 13 2012 05:07 mca64[KDV] wrote: Show nested quote + On December 13 2012 04:24 L_Master wrote: On December 12 2012 23:39 quirinus wrote: On December 12 2012 22:58 mca64[KDV] wrote: On December 12 2012 18:46 dr.shrinker wrote: Wish I could attend this - looks fun! you can same as fold shut up also, Kal_rA, you should remove SouthPark lol LOL didn't even see South Park was on there. He might get a nice kill streak southpark will be playin terran and his terran is real c/c+ That's like me signing up for the D KOTH. I'm ~C+ stop trolling, or start to think | ||
Kal_rA
United States2925 Posts
I'll host a B tourney when I get the time so then the A people can be the only ones complaining next | ||
dRaW
Canada5744 Posts
On December 11 2012 12:46 Reclusive wrote: + Show Spoiler + As soon as Fold overthrown the King, he completely erased and changed the previous governing system. He wanted to change this world. He wanted a world without violence. He established new laws. His new laws would punish not only the one who commit the crimes but also those who share a relation with the individual. Ninazerg watched as a man was caught by a soldier for stealing bread. The man pled the solider to let him take the bread to his family who haven’t eaten for days. The solider knocked the bread off the man’s hand and proceed to step on the bread. It was later known that the man along with his family were taken to the capital city and punished with death sentence. Within months, the city crime rate went down to almost zero but at what cause. The streets that were once fill with children playing and laughing now void of them. Ninazerg thought to herself, this is not the world she yearned for and there were many that share her thoughts as well. Those people then began to plot a rebellion. In order for the rebellion to be successful they would need someone with the power to take down Fold. WandS would have been the obvious choice to be the one that will take down Fold, had Wands not given up the path of fighting and became a pacifist. Once upon a time, WandS was considered the strongest warrior in this region in a term of one against one capability but that was changed when he was gifted a pink apron by L_Master. L_Master urged WandS to try it on. WandS declined at first but due to L_Master’s persistence and the temptation of the beautiful pink apron, WandS finally succumbed to L_Master’s persistence and put the apron on. L_Master then suggested WandS to make some fried rice. As soon as WandS step into the kitchen, he felt this aura of happiness and overall content with his life; he gave up his past life. Plus, the fried rice he made were delicious and fill with happiness. NoisE was the next candidate. Even though WandS was stronger than him in terms of strength, NoisE has a fighting chance against Fold. The majority of the group liked the idea of choosing NoisE to be the one. However, Ninazerg strongly opposed that idea. She argued that someone like NoisE who had lost all passion with this kingdom should not be someone for this kingdom to depend its hope on. It’s true that NoisE no longer wish to stay here, perhaps the only reason he’s still in this kingdom is because of Ninazerg. Even before the kingdom had fallen to Fold, NoisE had tried to persuade Ninazerg to move with him to the Kingdom of Airen, a kingdom that focuses more on collectivism rather than individualism. After the kingdom had fallen to Fold, NoisE reasoned with Ninazerg that this kingdom is dead. Ninazerg yelled at NoisE and gave him a speech on no matter what happened to this kingdom, she would always be here, guiding the kingdom. Despite the majority wished NoisE to take the position, NoisE stepped down. He realized Ninazerg was right, however, he will remain here because Ninazerg is still here. L_Master volunteer for the position but was completely shut-down by the group. What a joke, the group said. The next candidate in consideration was dRaW. dRaW was the obvious choice from the start to be the one to take down Fold but due to dRaW’s recent incompetency, he was heavily debated to be chosen for the position or not. dRaW was definitely stronger than Fold in every aspect. dRaW can take down hundreds of enemies charging at him without breaking a sweat. A feat not many can do. The thing that caused dRaW to be a heavily debate figure was because he can’t seem to win in a one against one situation, despite the fact he is stronger but is he really stronger than his opponent if he can’t beat the person in a one against one? In terms of skill level, his opponent would be D minus and he would be A minus but he would found himself at loss when his opponent outclass him in battle. Sometimes he wondered whether all the D minus opponents are really D minus or were they all smurfs. If the group chooses him, it would be suicidal. Ninazerg was considered but due to Ninazerg being a female, her consideration was dropped. Ninazerg claimed she can beat Fold even without the Weapons which is absurd. One of the reason Fold was able to overthrown the previous king was because he holds the Sword Caliburn, one of the nine Weapons. No one in the group knows what abilities Caliburn holds and to fight Fold without wielding a Weapon of their own is foolish, moronic, and idiotic. The group owns a replica, a copy, of the Bow Destin. A replica of the original Weapons are incompatible with females. The group decided to hold off the rebellion until they find a suitable person to wield their replica Bow Destin. Ninazerg, outrage at their decision, stated just how much longer their kingdom must continue to live at the shadows of Fold’s harsh rule. She argued that their army can overwhelm Fold along with his army and take control of the kingdom. The group agreed but without someone to challenge Fold for King’s Link, an ability that activates a kingdom’s shield. The ability can only gain by King’s passing to another King, or King killed by its challenger. A kingdom without King’s Link would be held captive against siege weapons. The Ninazerg affirms that this kingdom can defend itself against invasion force without King’s Link. The group ignored Ninazerg, concluding that she was irrational. Ninazerg concluded that this group and their army were incompetent, at the same time, she knew without the army support, she wouldn’t be able to make it to the capital city to challenge Fold. Ninazerg decided to venture to Solan, the city that rumors to holds the Weapon Solstice. She can gain the army support if she owns a Weapon. And so she went before discussing with her friends, dRaW, NoisE, and L_Master. She left them a note. While Ninazerg set out to find Weapon Solstice. L_Master became the spokesperson of the rebellion army because of his charisma, outgoing and spontaneous personality. While waiting for Ninazerg’s return, he slowly gathers support for their rebel army’s caused. NoisE has connection with the kingdom of Airen so he was the army’s main fundraiser. dRaW became the commander of the rebel army and is still trying to figure out who the smurfs were if there was any. WandS of course became the chef for the rebel army. A year later, Ninazerg returned to the kingdom. Ninazerg looked at the kingdom from the top of the hills. The kingdom had not changed one bit, if anything, it got darker. It seems time had stopped for this kingdom long ago. Ninazerg met up with her friends and the rebel army. While Ninazerg was shocked to learn her friends had become the core of the rebel army, her friends were filled with happiness of her returned. Their reunion was short-live since Ninazerg was in a rush to save this kingdom as soon as possible. She quickly demanded dRaW’s army support since she now holds a Weapon to fight Fold. Overnight, the main army assembled and marched toward the capital city, Eria. As they marched toward Eria, defeating local soldiers and conquering cities, the locals joined their caused. More and more cities rebelled and marched toward the capital to meet up with the main rebel army. They were ready to fight with Fold’s army but they were nowhere in sight. The defending cities had zero resistance. It became more and more apparent as they approach the capital. This gave Ninazerg, L_Master, NoisE and dRaW an uneasy feeling. They send scouts to scout all sides to prevent ambush but Fold’s army is simply gone. dRaW assumed Fold was recalling his army and cities local militia back to the capital and to only defend the capital. dRaW ordered his army to be extremely cautious as they marched toward Eria. Eria’s gate was within their sight. Eria, the city that was secluded from the outside world due to Fold’s reign, is now within their reach. Fold’s army was nowhere in sight. At the front entrance of the gate, there was only one person, Fold. Fold was standing there, waiting. dRaW gave a chuckle as he thought to himself does Fold think he can take on the whole army. The rebel army confused at the situation that were unfolding, what they thought was going be a gruesome day for the rebellion was ending up to be so different. dRaW send a messenger to demand Fold’s surrender and forfeit this Kingdom’s Link. Fold replied telling dRaW to bring forth their challenger to kill him to take this Kingdom’s Link. Or dRaW can use his army to overwhelm him and risk losing the Kingdom’s Link. Fold stated he does not want any blood to shed and if he loses to the challenger, he would gracefully forfeit everything. Ninazerg ran toward Fold. Fold asked if she is the challenger. Ninazerg nodded. Then suddenly the area surrounding them both began to change. The air stopped. Ninazerg can still breathe but there is no air in their environment. She turned back but the rebel army was nowhere in sight. It seems like they had entered a different dimension. Fold said this is the King’s System for the King and his challenger. Before Ninazerg can react, Fold charged toward Ninazerg with Caliburn. Ninazerg pulled out his Weapon Excalibur, same class as Caliburn, Sword class. Fold surprised to see Excalibur in the hands of Ninazerg questioned how Ninazerg got her hands on it. Ninazerg claimed she founded it on the outskirts of Solan while looking for Weapon Solstice. Fold was puzzle as to why Excalibur chose a new master. Fold shook off the irregular thoughts and returned to focus on the battle. Fold and Ninazerg trading blows back and forth, as each other tried to strike each other’s heart. Fold took a step back then a beam of red light form from the tips of Caliburn as Fold activated one of Caliburn’s ability, Burst. The ability would increase an individual fighting capability on their speed and strength by five percent as long as the individual is fighting within the one hundred meters long circle. Ninazerg noticed a giant red circle of length form around the ground. She looked up and saw Fold charging at her once again, she noticed Fold’s movements are faster, and harder to read. While deflecting Fold’s attacks, she slowly moves out of the circle. When she was almost out of the circle, Fold activated Burst V2, it extend the circle by seventy five meters while adding another five percent to his speed and strength. Ninazerg noticed the circle’s enlargement and tried to run out of the circle but Fold’s relentless strikes was pinning her down, restricting her movements. One thing she noticed was that Fold’s attack doesn’t aim toward critical spots like the head, the heart. It could be that Fold was trying to make her focus less on her critical spots then strike when she is least focus. Ninazerg continued to defect Fold’s attacks, unable to make an offense of her own, she can only defend. She knew she needs to get out of the circle in order to gain an advantage. The red circle extended another 50 meters as Fold activated Caliburn’s Burst V3. Ninazerg held Excalibur firmly while parried off any attempts made by Fold. Ninazerg breathed heavily realizing she could die at any moment. Her hands showed signs of tiredness as she continued to gasp for air. Despite all that, she held her ground against Fold’s advance while slowly moving backwards. Before she realized it, she was already out of the red circle. She looked at Fold who was in front of her seconds ago now gone, she blinked and the tip of Caliburn was inches away from her head and she looked at Fold as Fold looked at her. Ninazerg activated Excalibur’s ability, Flare but it was already too late. She then closed her eye to welcome her death. “Sorry.” Ninazerg thought to herself if she is in the afterworld. There was no pain, nothing. She then opened her eyes. She saw the gate of Eria. Is this the afterworld? She heard loud cheering noise from her back as she turned around seeing soldiers running toward her. Stunned, shocked, she turned back facing gate of Eria. Fold was in front of her, inches away, kneeling. His mouth was coughing blood with Caliburn in front of him. Ninazerg wondered what happened. She was the one supposed to die. Fold with his remaining strength tried to call Caliburn once again. Caliburn float up and flied toward Fold. Ninazerg watched as Caliburn’s tip pierce through Fold’s heart. The impact knocked Fold off his kneeling position to lying down on the ground facing toward the sky. Fold thought to himself if this okay as he looked at the sky. Ahh how long has it been since he had taken a good look at the sky he wondered. Was it always this blue? He saw a figure right above him. Ninazerg walked toward his body and looked at him from above. Why is this girl blocking his view of the sky? She should move away. He closed his eyes. He recalled his parents and him going to New Year festival, celebrating his birthday. He remembered his dad’s warm smile and his mom’s warm body as he sits on his mom’s lap sleeping. He remembered his parents killed by burglars. Despite his parents gave the burglar everything and pled them to take the money and leave them alone. He remembered his mom holding onto him in her arms and told him not to make a noise as her mom get knife at. He remembered his dad lying next to his mom as blood drips from her mom’s head onto his head but he could not scream, could not cry, and could not make a noise. He just stares at her mom’s eye. Fold wondered how long has it been since his parents died. Fold opened his eyes. The figure was still there watching him. Fold looked at her eyes. There was a white eye patch on her right eye cover by her long brown silky hair but her left eye was bright blue. He can’t help but thinks how he had seen that eye before. He closed his eyes again. It was a sunny afternoon. He went to sleep under the large tree at the orphanage. The sun lights were hitting him since the tree could not block all the sun. Before he realized it, he felt asleep. Fold woke up later. As he opened his eyes, he was met with one large teal eye along with one large light blue eye looking down at him and a girl patting on his hair. The girl realized he had woken up and frantically trying to find something to said, her words were incoherent. Fold ignored it because the sensation he was feeling was nostalgic as he lied on the girl’s lap. A feeling he had been long searching for was here. The warmth he once felt and lost, now here again. Before he realized it, there were tears flowing out of his eyes. The girl who had regained posture once again fluster because she wondered if it’s because she did something. Fold opened his watery eyes and told the girl to never leave him. The girl confused and flustered but musters enough strength to said “Okay”. Then Fold went back to sleep as the girl wipe his tears with her handkerchief. He woke up one last time, the girl was still there looking at him. She smiled at him as he smiled back. Then her right eye began to change color. His eyes locked onto her right eye, Fold tried to look away but he can’t. He sensed something is off. He tried to get up and move away but he can’t move. He was paralyzed. The girl lowered her head as her right eye locked onto Fold’s eyes. Fold began to feel fear as if the eye is piercing his soul, judging his past, present and future. He tried to yell for help but he seems to have loss control of his body. As the girl lowered her head closer and closer to Fold, Fold became more and more scare. The orphanage bell rang. The girl eye returned normal. The girl realized her head was extremely close to Fold’s head. Her face turned red, fluster and tried to find words to say. Fold opened his eyes only to see smokes and the girl at the entrance of his room calling out to him, urging him to get up from his bed and run away from here. The orphanage was under attack. The girl took Fold by his hand and ran toward the back exit. The girl told Fold to run to the village to call for help as she went back inside the orphanage to save the other kids. When he had returned from the village with help, the orphanage was already burned to the ground. Fold tried to find the girl among the ruins. He found her among the pile of burn bodies along with her handkerchief. Fold opened his eyes. The figure was still there. A gust of wind blew past the figure’s face, her hair flow to the direction of the wind along with the eye patch, revealing her large round teal eye. She quickly used her right hand to cover the right eye. It seem Ninazerg’s eye patch had sustain damage from the fight. So you are alive, Fold thought to himself. I will finished this tomorrow. I have to go . I think there's around 3 more parahraph or hopefully.. It really wasn't suppose to be this long but somehow one thing lead to another. I didn't revise it or anything so don't be too harsh if you decide to judge it... ALL I WANTED TO WRITE WAS A HYPE FOR FOLD AND NINAZERG. TLDR: Go Fold, Go NinaZerg. + Show Spoiler + Meanwhile, Reclusive is shocked and sad that Excalibur had chosen a new master Finish it and include yourself in the story to reclaim Excalibur | ||
L_Master
United States7946 Posts
On December 13 2012 10:51 dRaW wrote: Show nested quote + On December 11 2012 12:46 Reclusive wrote: + Show Spoiler + As soon as Fold overthrown the King, he completely erased and changed the previous governing system. He wanted to change this world. He wanted a world without violence. He established new laws. His new laws would punish not only the one who commit the crimes but also those who share a relation with the individual. Ninazerg watched as a man was caught by a soldier for stealing bread. The man pled the solider to let him take the bread to his family who haven’t eaten for days. The solider knocked the bread off the man’s hand and proceed to step on the bread. It was later known that the man along with his family were taken to the capital city and punished with death sentence. Within months, the city crime rate went down to almost zero but at what cause. The streets that were once fill with children playing and laughing now void of them. Ninazerg thought to herself, this is not the world she yearned for and there were many that share her thoughts as well. Those people then began to plot a rebellion. In order for the rebellion to be successful they would need someone with the power to take down Fold. WandS would have been the obvious choice to be the one that will take down Fold, had Wands not given up the path of fighting and became a pacifist. Once upon a time, WandS was considered the strongest warrior in this region in a term of one against one capability but that was changed when he was gifted a pink apron by L_Master. L_Master urged WandS to try it on. WandS declined at first but due to L_Master’s persistence and the temptation of the beautiful pink apron, WandS finally succumbed to L_Master’s persistence and put the apron on. L_Master then suggested WandS to make some fried rice. As soon as WandS step into the kitchen, he felt this aura of happiness and overall content with his life; he gave up his past life. Plus, the fried rice he made were delicious and fill with happiness. NoisE was the next candidate. Even though WandS was stronger than him in terms of strength, NoisE has a fighting chance against Fold. The majority of the group liked the idea of choosing NoisE to be the one. However, Ninazerg strongly opposed that idea. She argued that someone like NoisE who had lost all passion with this kingdom should not be someone for this kingdom to depend its hope on. It’s true that NoisE no longer wish to stay here, perhaps the only reason he’s still in this kingdom is because of Ninazerg. Even before the kingdom had fallen to Fold, NoisE had tried to persuade Ninazerg to move with him to the Kingdom of Airen, a kingdom that focuses more on collectivism rather than individualism. After the kingdom had fallen to Fold, NoisE reasoned with Ninazerg that this kingdom is dead. Ninazerg yelled at NoisE and gave him a speech on no matter what happened to this kingdom, she would always be here, guiding the kingdom. Despite the majority wished NoisE to take the position, NoisE stepped down. He realized Ninazerg was right, however, he will remain here because Ninazerg is still here. L_Master volunteer for the position but was completely shut-down by the group. What a joke, the group said. The next candidate in consideration was dRaW. dRaW was the obvious choice from the start to be the one to take down Fold but due to dRaW’s recent incompetency, he was heavily debated to be chosen for the position or not. dRaW was definitely stronger than Fold in every aspect. dRaW can take down hundreds of enemies charging at him without breaking a sweat. A feat not many can do. The thing that caused dRaW to be a heavily debate figure was because he can’t seem to win in a one against one situation, despite the fact he is stronger but is he really stronger than his opponent if he can’t beat the person in a one against one? In terms of skill level, his opponent would be D minus and he would be A minus but he would found himself at loss when his opponent outclass him in battle. Sometimes he wondered whether all the D minus opponents are really D minus or were they all smurfs. If the group chooses him, it would be suicidal. Ninazerg was considered but due to Ninazerg being a female, her consideration was dropped. Ninazerg claimed she can beat Fold even without the Weapons which is absurd. One of the reason Fold was able to overthrown the previous king was because he holds the Sword Caliburn, one of the nine Weapons. No one in the group knows what abilities Caliburn holds and to fight Fold without wielding a Weapon of their own is foolish, moronic, and idiotic. The group owns a replica, a copy, of the Bow Destin. A replica of the original Weapons are incompatible with females. The group decided to hold off the rebellion until they find a suitable person to wield their replica Bow Destin. Ninazerg, outrage at their decision, stated just how much longer their kingdom must continue to live at the shadows of Fold’s harsh rule. She argued that their army can overwhelm Fold along with his army and take control of the kingdom. The group agreed but without someone to challenge Fold for King’s Link, an ability that activates a kingdom’s shield. The ability can only gain by King’s passing to another King, or King killed by its challenger. A kingdom without King’s Link would be held captive against siege weapons. The Ninazerg affirms that this kingdom can defend itself against invasion force without King’s Link. The group ignored Ninazerg, concluding that she was irrational. Ninazerg concluded that this group and their army were incompetent, at the same time, she knew without the army support, she wouldn’t be able to make it to the capital city to challenge Fold. Ninazerg decided to venture to Solan, the city that rumors to holds the Weapon Solstice. She can gain the army support if she owns a Weapon. And so she went before discussing with her friends, dRaW, NoisE, and L_Master. She left them a note. While Ninazerg set out to find Weapon Solstice. L_Master became the spokesperson of the rebellion army because of his charisma, outgoing and spontaneous personality. While waiting for Ninazerg’s return, he slowly gathers support for their rebel army’s caused. NoisE has connection with the kingdom of Airen so he was the army’s main fundraiser. dRaW became the commander of the rebel army and is still trying to figure out who the smurfs were if there was any. WandS of course became the chef for the rebel army. A year later, Ninazerg returned to the kingdom. Ninazerg looked at the kingdom from the top of the hills. The kingdom had not changed one bit, if anything, it got darker. It seems time had stopped for this kingdom long ago. Ninazerg met up with her friends and the rebel army. While Ninazerg was shocked to learn her friends had become the core of the rebel army, her friends were filled with happiness of her returned. Their reunion was short-live since Ninazerg was in a rush to save this kingdom as soon as possible. She quickly demanded dRaW’s army support since she now holds a Weapon to fight Fold. Overnight, the main army assembled and marched toward the capital city, Eria. As they marched toward Eria, defeating local soldiers and conquering cities, the locals joined their caused. More and more cities rebelled and marched toward the capital to meet up with the main rebel army. They were ready to fight with Fold’s army but they were nowhere in sight. The defending cities had zero resistance. It became more and more apparent as they approach the capital. This gave Ninazerg, L_Master, NoisE and dRaW an uneasy feeling. They send scouts to scout all sides to prevent ambush but Fold’s army is simply gone. dRaW assumed Fold was recalling his army and cities local militia back to the capital and to only defend the capital. dRaW ordered his army to be extremely cautious as they marched toward Eria. Eria’s gate was within their sight. Eria, the city that was secluded from the outside world due to Fold’s reign, is now within their reach. Fold’s army was nowhere in sight. At the front entrance of the gate, there was only one person, Fold. Fold was standing there, waiting. dRaW gave a chuckle as he thought to himself does Fold think he can take on the whole army. The rebel army confused at the situation that were unfolding, what they thought was going be a gruesome day for the rebellion was ending up to be so different. dRaW send a messenger to demand Fold’s surrender and forfeit this Kingdom’s Link. Fold replied telling dRaW to bring forth their challenger to kill him to take this Kingdom’s Link. Or dRaW can use his army to overwhelm him and risk losing the Kingdom’s Link. Fold stated he does not want any blood to shed and if he loses to the challenger, he would gracefully forfeit everything. Ninazerg ran toward Fold. Fold asked if she is the challenger. Ninazerg nodded. Then suddenly the area surrounding them both began to change. The air stopped. Ninazerg can still breathe but there is no air in their environment. She turned back but the rebel army was nowhere in sight. It seems like they had entered a different dimension. Fold said this is the King’s System for the King and his challenger. Before Ninazerg can react, Fold charged toward Ninazerg with Caliburn. Ninazerg pulled out his Weapon Excalibur, same class as Caliburn, Sword class. Fold surprised to see Excalibur in the hands of Ninazerg questioned how Ninazerg got her hands on it. Ninazerg claimed she founded it on the outskirts of Solan while looking for Weapon Solstice. Fold was puzzle as to why Excalibur chose a new master. Fold shook off the irregular thoughts and returned to focus on the battle. Fold and Ninazerg trading blows back and forth, as each other tried to strike each other’s heart. Fold took a step back then a beam of red light form from the tips of Caliburn as Fold activated one of Caliburn’s ability, Burst. The ability would increase an individual fighting capability on their speed and strength by five percent as long as the individual is fighting within the one hundred meters long circle. Ninazerg noticed a giant red circle of length form around the ground. She looked up and saw Fold charging at her once again, she noticed Fold’s movements are faster, and harder to read. While deflecting Fold’s attacks, she slowly moves out of the circle. When she was almost out of the circle, Fold activated Burst V2, it extend the circle by seventy five meters while adding another five percent to his speed and strength. Ninazerg noticed the circle’s enlargement and tried to run out of the circle but Fold’s relentless strikes was pinning her down, restricting her movements. One thing she noticed was that Fold’s attack doesn’t aim toward critical spots like the head, the heart. It could be that Fold was trying to make her focus less on her critical spots then strike when she is least focus. Ninazerg continued to defect Fold’s attacks, unable to make an offense of her own, she can only defend. She knew she needs to get out of the circle in order to gain an advantage. The red circle extended another 50 meters as Fold activated Caliburn’s Burst V3. Ninazerg held Excalibur firmly while parried off any attempts made by Fold. Ninazerg breathed heavily realizing she could die at any moment. Her hands showed signs of tiredness as she continued to gasp for air. Despite all that, she held her ground against Fold’s advance while slowly moving backwards. Before she realized it, she was already out of the red circle. She looked at Fold who was in front of her seconds ago now gone, she blinked and the tip of Caliburn was inches away from her head and she looked at Fold as Fold looked at her. Ninazerg activated Excalibur’s ability, Flare but it was already too late. She then closed her eye to welcome her death. “Sorry.” Ninazerg thought to herself if she is in the afterworld. There was no pain, nothing. She then opened her eyes. She saw the gate of Eria. Is this the afterworld? She heard loud cheering noise from her back as she turned around seeing soldiers running toward her. Stunned, shocked, she turned back facing gate of Eria. Fold was in front of her, inches away, kneeling. His mouth was coughing blood with Caliburn in front of him. Ninazerg wondered what happened. She was the one supposed to die. Fold with his remaining strength tried to call Caliburn once again. Caliburn float up and flied toward Fold. Ninazerg watched as Caliburn’s tip pierce through Fold’s heart. The impact knocked Fold off his kneeling position to lying down on the ground facing toward the sky. Fold thought to himself if this okay as he looked at the sky. Ahh how long has it been since he had taken a good look at the sky he wondered. Was it always this blue? He saw a figure right above him. Ninazerg walked toward his body and looked at him from above. Why is this girl blocking his view of the sky? She should move away. He closed his eyes. He recalled his parents and him going to New Year festival, celebrating his birthday. He remembered his dad’s warm smile and his mom’s warm body as he sits on his mom’s lap sleeping. He remembered his parents killed by burglars. Despite his parents gave the burglar everything and pled them to take the money and leave them alone. He remembered his mom holding onto him in her arms and told him not to make a noise as her mom get knife at. He remembered his dad lying next to his mom as blood drips from her mom’s head onto his head but he could not scream, could not cry, and could not make a noise. He just stares at her mom’s eye. Fold wondered how long has it been since his parents died. Fold opened his eyes. The figure was still there watching him. Fold looked at her eyes. There was a white eye patch on her right eye cover by her long brown silky hair but her left eye was bright blue. He can’t help but thinks how he had seen that eye before. He closed his eyes again. It was a sunny afternoon. He went to sleep under the large tree at the orphanage. The sun lights were hitting him since the tree could not block all the sun. Before he realized it, he felt asleep. Fold woke up later. As he opened his eyes, he was met with one large teal eye along with one large light blue eye looking down at him and a girl patting on his hair. The girl realized he had woken up and frantically trying to find something to said, her words were incoherent. Fold ignored it because the sensation he was feeling was nostalgic as he lied on the girl’s lap. A feeling he had been long searching for was here. The warmth he once felt and lost, now here again. Before he realized it, there were tears flowing out of his eyes. The girl who had regained posture once again fluster because she wondered if it’s because she did something. Fold opened his watery eyes and told the girl to never leave him. The girl confused and flustered but musters enough strength to said “Okay”. Then Fold went back to sleep as the girl wipe his tears with her handkerchief. He woke up one last time, the girl was still there looking at him. She smiled at him as he smiled back. Then her right eye began to change color. His eyes locked onto her right eye, Fold tried to look away but he can’t. He sensed something is off. He tried to get up and move away but he can’t move. He was paralyzed. The girl lowered her head as her right eye locked onto Fold’s eyes. Fold began to feel fear as if the eye is piercing his soul, judging his past, present and future. He tried to yell for help but he seems to have loss control of his body. As the girl lowered her head closer and closer to Fold, Fold became more and more scare. The orphanage bell rang. The girl eye returned normal. The girl realized her head was extremely close to Fold’s head. Her face turned red, fluster and tried to find words to say. Fold opened his eyes only to see smokes and the girl at the entrance of his room calling out to him, urging him to get up from his bed and run away from here. The orphanage was under attack. The girl took Fold by his hand and ran toward the back exit. The girl told Fold to run to the village to call for help as she went back inside the orphanage to save the other kids. When he had returned from the village with help, the orphanage was already burned to the ground. Fold tried to find the girl among the ruins. He found her among the pile of burn bodies along with her handkerchief. Fold opened his eyes. The figure was still there. A gust of wind blew past the figure’s face, her hair flow to the direction of the wind along with the eye patch, revealing her large round teal eye. She quickly used her right hand to cover the right eye. It seem Ninazerg’s eye patch had sustain damage from the fight. So you are alive, Fold thought to himself. I will finished this tomorrow. I have to go . I think there's around 3 more parahraph or hopefully.. It really wasn't suppose to be this long but somehow one thing lead to another. I didn't revise it or anything so don't be too harsh if you decide to judge it... ALL I WANTED TO WRITE WAS A HYPE FOR FOLD AND NINAZERG. TLDR: Go Fold, Go NinaZerg. + Show Spoiler + Meanwhile, Reclusive is shocked and sad that Excalibur had chosen a new master Finish it and include yourself in the story to reclaim Excalibur I can only assume those last few paragraphs are tough to write | ||
Glioburd
France1900 Posts
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Breach_hu
Hungary2431 Posts
ICCUP - dubstep Terran Max rank C+ | ||
krndandaman
Mozambique16569 Posts
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TelecoM
United States10583 Posts
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krndandaman
Mozambique16569 Posts
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mca64[KDV]
Poland463 Posts
On December 14 2012 06:06 krndandaman wrote: Show nested quote + On December 13 2012 19:53 Breach_hu wrote: Count me in. ICCUP - dubstep Terran Max rank C+ oh shoot when I played you you were z/p C+ with all races!? No. He won ysl vs fold who is C player, who won vs shrinker B-, but he cant play pvp. So when breach will be offracin using someone others logic here, he has the same rank with all races, cause he has the same mechanical skills and other shit. So breach = C with all races! | ||
krndandaman
Mozambique16569 Posts
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TelecoM
United States10583 Posts
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Reclusive
United States88 Posts
Anyway. Fold will crush all those easily then he will meet Ninazerg! + Show Spoiler + Don't mean to put pressure on you Fold but don't disappoint me! | ||
Zergneedsfood
United States10671 Posts
On December 14 2012 11:41 GGzerG wrote: mca you are the most annoying and obnoxious poster I have come across so far in the BW forum's, and most of what you say makes no sense... you are not Sherlock Holmes so please relax with all the conspiracy theories. Wow, coming from you...that's harsh bro. | ||
TelecoM
United States10583 Posts
On December 14 2012 12:32 Zergneedsfood wrote: Show nested quote + On December 14 2012 11:41 GGzerG wrote: mca you are the most annoying and obnoxious poster I have come across so far in the BW forum's, and most of what you say makes no sense... you are not Sherlock Holmes so please relax with all the conspiracy theories. Wow, coming from you...that's harsh bro. If only we could meet in this to play each other, I'm sure you would enjoy it as much as I would. -- | ||
Zergneedsfood
United States10671 Posts
On December 14 2012 13:42 GGzerG wrote: Show nested quote + On December 14 2012 12:32 Zergneedsfood wrote: On December 14 2012 11:41 GGzerG wrote: mca you are the most annoying and obnoxious poster I have come across so far in the BW forum's, and most of what you say makes no sense... you are not Sherlock Holmes so please relax with all the conspiracy theories. Wow, coming from you...that's harsh bro. If only we could meet in this to play each other, I'm sure you would enjoy it as much as I would. -- I love your inability to bring two unrelated things together. It's comments like these that leave me wasting a good two minutes of my time trying to actually figure out what you're trying to say and then I realize that I'm just being silly giving you that kind of credibility. | ||
Kal_rA
United States2925 Posts
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TelecoM
United States10583 Posts
On December 14 2012 13:47 Zergneedsfood wrote: Show nested quote + On December 14 2012 13:42 GGzerG wrote: On December 14 2012 12:32 Zergneedsfood wrote: On December 14 2012 11:41 GGzerG wrote: mca you are the most annoying and obnoxious poster I have come across so far in the BW forum's, and most of what you say makes no sense... you are not Sherlock Holmes so please relax with all the conspiracy theories. Wow, coming from you...that's harsh bro. If only we could meet in this to play each other, I'm sure you would enjoy it as much as I would. -- I love your inability to bring two unrelated things together. It's comments like these that leave me wasting a good two minutes of my time trying to actually figure out what you're trying to say and then I realize that I'm just being silly giving you that kind of credibility. I didn't think it would actually take a rocket scientist to figure out that what I was hinting at, is that you talk a lot, but would never play me, but if I end up being king and then you get the chance to play me, I would enjoy playing but I don't think you would for obvious reasons. | ||
radley
Poland577 Posts
On December 14 2012 16:19 Kal_rA wrote: Waiting on radley to play Mewka.. Hes being pretty unresponsive in PMs. Giving him till Sunday night Pacific to reply to me or hes auto de-throned. LOL, you say that i'm unresponsive after 2 hours from sending me msg, come on... I have set up game with Mewka for today 19 CET. So if next challenger has time he can also come to play winner if he is in hurry. | ||
dOTY
Germany483 Posts
On December 14 2012 11:41 GGzerG wrote: mca you are the most annoying and obnoxious poster I have come across so far in the BW forum's, and most of what you say makes no sense... you are not Sherlock Holmes so please relax with all the conspiracy theories. ###### | ||
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